He smiled,
His brother lay covered with blood,
Split emotions.
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WoW! That's a powerful haiku, Elvira! Perfect image too 🙂 Do you follow the 5-7-5 syllable count haiku or is there a different pattern? I've only written a few so I'm curious :-)I am sure that I followed your blog, yet I'm not in your GFC list 🙁 Will join again to make sure. Sorry about the confusion. Thanks for your nice comments at my blog. 🙂
Thanks Fiona for ur kind appreciation:) I know of 5-7-5 syllable count haiku but i follow my own pattern :-)And may be there was some site error….now u can see urslf as a member:)
Hello Elvira.There is something very sinister & dark about this Haiku.You expressed it very well.Thanks for sharing & for all your visits. Your kindness has been appreciated.Please stop by my blog when you get a chance. I have a special surprise for you here…
Hey very powerful Haiku. Congratulation on the award given by Andy David.http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.in/2012/02/dark-desire.html
@ Andy- Thanx for ur kind words and happy dat u liked it:)
@Rimly- Thanx a lot 🙂